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Ick – Stream of Consciousness Saturday #SoCS

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Nick and Rick approached the skate ramp with their skateboards tucked up under their arms.

“You sure about this, Nick?” Rick asked.

“Of course, dude. I’ve been practicing for weeks. Just watch me. I’ll nail that move this time.”

Rick watched as Nick mounted his skateboard and started doing some tricks on the ramp. He started with some simple flips, including some kickflips and kickback flips, then started to ride his board up and down the sides of the ramp, building up speed for some aerial tricks.

Rick watched, impressed, as Nick pulled off a couple of air tricks. Nick noticed and managed to flash him a grin and thumbs-up on his way by, as if to say “See, what’d I tell you?”

But just as he was coming down the side of the ramp after his next trick, he somehow landed wrong and went tumbling down the side of the ramp, his skateboard slowly rolling to a stop near him.

Rick ran to his side. He didn’t think the fall had looked that bad, and they were both wearing some padding. “Aw, did ickle Nicky take a fall?” Rick said jokingly as he knelt beside his friend.

“Shut up, dude, and help me up, will you?” Nick said from where he lay facedown at the bottom of the ramp.

Rick turned Nick over and was about to grab his arm to help him up when he noticed his leg. “Aw, dude! Your leg! Ick! I think I’m gonna be sick!”

“What are you talking about, dude?” Nick asked, then looked at his leg. His shin bone had broken clean through the skin. “Aw, dude! I think I’m gonna be sick, too.” The pain of the break finally registered and he grimaced. “Ugh! Hurry and go call an ambulance, man!”


This post is part of the Stream of Consciousness Saturday prompt, “ick”:

The Friday Reminder and Prompt for #SoCS July 8/17

 

 

 

 

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Author: jowensauthor

I'm a geeky, animal/cat-loving author of Fantasy and YA Fiction. I'm a supporter of animal charities such as the WWF. I'm also a fan of anime and sci-fi/fantasy. I'm an avid reader as well, and enjoy mainly reading fantasies, mysteries, and books about animals. I have a B.A. in History with a minor in English. I also dabble in making jewelry, reading tarot, and am interested in the paranormal. You can find out more about me and my various books and writings at my website: http://jeanneowens.weebly.com. You can also find me on Facebook, Google+, Tumblr, Twitter, Goodreads, and Pinterest.

7 thoughts on “Ick – Stream of Consciousness Saturday #SoCS

  1. Great piece, very great choose of words and imagery!

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  2. Wow, this was so well written! Goodness, you used the prompt perfectly and with some amazing imagery.
    Do you have other prompt blogs you would recommend? I love prompts , exchanges and contests!

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  3. It hurts to read that…

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